http://www.tzplanet.com/light-delirious/2010/analyzing-the-produce.html a photoblog by Antonio Marques Sat, 28 Jul 2012 23:00:44 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.40 http://www.tzplanet.com/light-delirious/2010/analyzing-the-produce.html/comment-page-1#comment-29 Wed, 02 Jun 2010 08:42:38 +0000 http://tzplanet.com/light-delirious/?p=434#comment-29 Hi Chris,
Thanks for a very insightful and constructive comment. Unfortunately there aren’t many of those around.
As you mentioned, it would improve greatly the photo if I had managed to use the straight lines of the shelf to direct the eyes to his face, but I couldn’t position myself any better without risking intruding on his “moment”. In any case, I don’t agree when you say that you are asking for too much – you simply mentioned a different composition that would make the image much more stronger and appealing… The strive for photographic improvement.
I’m also a huge fan of grain, and it is one of the main reasons I’m dedicating a bit more time to film.
Thanks again for dropping by.

]]> http://www.tzplanet.com/light-delirious/2010/analyzing-the-produce.html/comment-page-1#comment-28 Wed, 02 Jun 2010 00:06:43 +0000 http://tzplanet.com/light-delirious/?p=434#comment-28 It’s an intriguing photo. But I would like to have seen less ceiling space, more of the person, and perhaps a different angle so the perspective lines of the shelving drew attention to his listless gaze. Hard, I know, when you’re shooting from the hip. I AM asking too much. Film handling looks fine. Coarse grain is appealing (but I’m a fan of grain).

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